Proposal Grade & Feedback
I received my grade and feedback
for the proposal, I felt I worked really hard on the assignment and put a lot
of time into both the research and writing of the paper.
I received a B1 for my efforts
and I was at first a little upset I hadn’t got a slightly higher grade, but
over all after speaking with Emma I’m really pleased with the grade and the
feedback.
The feedback is both positive
and helpful, I’m pleased that my concept was explain well on paper as I
struggle to tell my peers or tutors what my project is about in short.
Thinking about harmful
ingredients and brands the comments about being delicate in this area are
helpful, I wasn’t planning on naming and shaming individual brands but rather
being transparent about what ingredients regular beauty products contain and
their effects on health/wellbeing. After a chat with Emma I have decided a list
of harmful ingredients would be more helpful than focusing on products.
It would have been helpful to
have more website layouts- I did create a mock site on Wix, however it did not
reflect what I envisioned so did not include it in my proposal; on reflection I
should have included the link for a general idea.
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